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This is the first time writing a crit... (woop woop)

Anyway, I love the face, the detail within the face is amazing. The colouring of the eyes are perfect,,, seem like gold (i can never get that colour right.
You really do give a lot of attention to the details (such as each individual eye lashes)


The Only two things that would make the picture better for me, if you carried on the level of detail to the rest of the picture. (the face seem hard details) the rest seems so soft compared to the face.
Eg the hair... Would be great if was a little more depth, such as darker shadowing.
Also the right eye is a little cross eyed.

I like how the lip turns up a little, a nice lazy smile.

You know i love your work always.
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:iconradiant-suzuka:
Yay my first critique! :D I was starting to think that people were avoiding the critique button on my images ;P

Thank you very much for taking the time to do this :D lol, she does look rather cross-eyed now doesn't she? - for some reason I tend to do that a lot in my images ;P

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I think most people are a little cross eyed....
NP *hugs*

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